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00Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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00I saw your advertisement for daily Dawn newspapers, issued on 27 January 2007. I am very interested in the job Finance Officer. I graduated in commerce from University of the Punjab in Commerce 2003. I took MBA – Finance final exam form Federal Urdu University and waiting for result.02br
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00After graduating from Punjab University with a degree in commerce, I worked as a Trainee Audit in Masom & Co, a well-known audit firm. I gained solid basic concepts to the accounting, vouching, office rules and regulations, filing system, accomplishment of tasks in time, time management, analytical and problem solving skills there. 02br
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00Then I joined Z-Communication (Pvt) Ltd a well known payphone company. There I was working as Accounts Assistant and was responsible for making payments, deposits, bank reconciliations , as well as generating innovative methods to improve our process related to Accounts department. I also fine-tuned my communication and consensus building skills, as I often needed to present and market my work to middle and upper management. 02br
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00Being an optimistic and creative team player with very good presentation skills and a wide range of interests, I will be able to work self-contained. Not only personal strengths in analytical thinking, problem solving and identifying the determining factors of success, but also very good communication skills make me feel being the right person for the post of Finance Officer. 02br
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00I have enclosed my resume for your review. I welcome the opportunity to meet with you for an interview at your convenience.02br
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00Thank you02br
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00Sincerely, 0-