Please review my cousin's writing

I’ve just finished reading a really good book. What kinds of thing do you enjoy reading? Do you prefer books or magazines? Tell me something about a famous writer from your country.

Thanks for your letter. I'm happy to hear that you read a good book and so do I. I have just read "The Ugly Duckling", the story of Andersen.

The transformation from the ugly to the better of main character in this book made me attractive a lot. And I enjoy everything about reading. In my opinion, it's the best way to relax or get more information to help your knowledge improved.

I think reading better than spending all time playing games or sitting in front of the TV. To me, I prefer books to magazines because books contain loads of things I've ever knowns. And let me share with you a famous writer in my country I lived. This is "Nguyen Nhat Anh". He is considered to be one of Vietnam's most successful for teenagers. His work is very attractive to readers, both adult and children. If you interested in romantic, I think you should read his stories, you won't be disappointed.