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김성현 Posted 8 years ago
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Please review my catch phrases - Is there any difference in nuance?

Dear teachers,

I made catch phrases in English as follows. Could you please review them and let me know whether they are understandable?

It would be also appreciated if you could let me know whether there is any difference in nuance.

  • A New Start, A New Challenge: Beyond Borders
  • A New Start, A New Challenge -- Beyond Borders
  • Beyond Borders: A New Start, A New Challenge
  • Beyond Borders -- A New Start, A New Challenge

Thanks and best regards,


David Kim

  

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To answer this properly we would need to know what "Beyond Borders" is. But with no context, generally speaking, the brand name should come first, so either the 3rd or 4th one should be used. Also, the phrase, "A New Start, A New Challenge", is "catchy," but it seems a little questionable.

  • To answer this properly we would need to know what "Beyond Borders" is.
  • But with no context, generally speaking, the brand name should come first, so either the 3rd or 4th one should be used.
  • Also, the phrase, "A New Start, A New Challenge", is "catchy," but it seems a little questionable.
  • Generally, if something is a "new start", that would be the catchy main theme.
  • Following it with "a new challenge" introduces another hard-hitting theme, which confuses the issue (similarly, starting with "a new challenge" followed by "a new theme" would confuse things).
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To answer this properly we would need to know what "Beyond Borders" is. But with no context, generally speaking, the brand name should come first, so either the 3rd or 4th one should be used. Also, the phrase, "A New Start, A New Challenge", is "catchy," but it seems a little questionable. Generally, if something is a "new start", that would be the catchy main theme. Following it with "a n

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