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Have you ever passed out or seen someone pass out? What happened?
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When I was a student in master degree, one day my tutor said to me go to laboratory quickly and check our test’s result. I took a taxi and went to the university. When I arrived, I wanted to close the taxi’s door and then, because I was in a hurry and was a little reckless, my left hand remained between the door. I ignored it, but at the middle of my way I saw my hand is blooding very badly. I ran to upstairs of our building, while I had severe vertigo and could not tell apart faces. I knew my roommate is in laboratory near us. So, I went there and called her. From then on, I didn’t remember anything. I had passed out. When I woke up, I had lay on the earth. My friend gave me some sweets and then, I felt better.
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When I was a student in master degree [ 1] , one day my tutor said to asked me to go to the laboratory quickly and check our test’s result. I took a taxi and went to the university. When I arrived, I wanted went to close the taxi’s door and then, because I was in a hurry and wa s n’t paying attention, a little reckless, I slammed the door on, and injured, my left han d.
- When I was a student in master degree [ 1] , one day my tutor said to asked me to go to the laboratory quickly and check our test’s result.
- I took a taxi and went to the university.
- When I arrived, I wanted went to close the taxi’s door and then, because I was in a hurry and wa s n’t paying attention, a little reckless, I slammed the door on, and injured, my left han d.
- remained between the door.
- I ignored it, but at the middle of on my way to the lab, I saw my hand (was) is blooding bleeding very badly.
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When I was a student in master degree [ 1], one day my tutor said to asked me to go to the laboratory quickly and check our test’s result. I took a taxi and went to the university. When I arrived, I wanted
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