Please review - IELTS Writing task 1

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QUESTION: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.

Write at least 150 words.

The two pie charts show various cultural and leisure activities that boys and girls took part as obtained from a survey. The activities chosen by boys and girls vary quite a bit.

Computer games is favourite choice of 34% boys. It is also the highest chosen option. Boys chose reading the least. Basketball is played by 26% of boys and about 17% chose soccer. Almost equal numbers were seen for listening to music and skateboarding at 10% and 11% respectively. About 10% girls too chose to listen to music, just like boys, but this is their last favourite pass time. Netball and computer games have similar percentages of representation from girls. As high as 27% girls chose dancing and 21% for reading. These two are the most sought after activities by girls. Another 11% chose gymnastics.

Boys choose computer games as their preferred cultural and leisure activity. Whereas girls choose dancing. Although many girls chose reading, very few boys preferred it.