Please review and score my Writing Task 2 essay

Topic : People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve
environmental problems. Give your opinion.

Many people believe that government should introduce law in increasing the fuel for transportations’ cost to address with environmental issues. I agree with this opinion. This essay will reveal the reasons why fossil fuels’ cost should be pared down.

Fossil fuels play a significant role in human being since some vehicles are run by fossil fuels. Those means operate rapidly that help us saving time. Nevertheless, it’s appear to be some disadvantages of fossil fuels to the environment. The burning of those depletes the emission of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, brings about the deterioration of air quality. Exhaust fumes that eliminated from fuels results in serious environmental degradation as these leads to severe effects on plants and animals. These are the first reason why fossil’s cost should be diminished.

Secondly, if fossil fuels’ cost were too expensive, some people would turn into means which use alternative fuels. This helps raise public awareness of environmental problems, encourage people to use public transports. More than that, it safeguards the environment. There are still many solutions to deal with environmental issues, such as planting more trees, lessening the amount of waste…Although these measures were applied and gave the effect, this solution of putting up the fossil’s cost seems to be most efficient.

From all the reasons above, I see eye to eye with the statement that there should be a rise on fuels’ cost.