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Write a passage about 300-400 words about the statement "The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on our civilization". Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

These days, Internet is becoming more popular and more popular in people's daily lives. Despite the advantages that the Internet offers, there are some drawbacks existing that affect people strongly and negatively. So I am going to outline some specific reasons in this following pasage.

Firstly, after the Internet has been invented, people started to rely on it to communicate with each other. Little by little, Internet has made the distance between people in our society apart. We are now used to contacting through social media and refuse to talk face-to-face. In fact, Internet has decreased the oppoturnity for people to meet each other in real life. It seems convenient, but it has brought some troubles for people.

Secondly, children are becoming passive because of Internet. Years ago, without Internet or electrical goods, children used to go out and create their own games to play together. They would go out, discover new things of the nature, or even help their mothers with the houseowork. But now, after going home from school, most of them go straight to the room and play video games or hace conversations with their friends on the Internet in lieu of having a chat with their parents. Day by day, interacting with Internet too much has destroyed the creativities of children and has prevented them from growing up naturally.

Finally, the Internet has opened a new place for the new criminals to do the bad things. A new kind of criminals called "Hacker" has been existed with the purpose of stealing people's money or srpeadibg virus from computer to computer through Internet. Tbey even spread unfounded criticisms and steal your personal information.

To sum up, with the appearance of the Internet, it has brought many problems for the society. I believe that we are now relying on it too much and overlooking the good things in out daily lives. It's high time for us to stop this and using Internet rightly should be well-consider by people in our society.

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