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Oleksiy Posted 11 years ago
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There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Many times I heard that young people can’t teach older people anything. And the main argument was that older people lived longer than young one. As a result older people have more experience and their knowledge is much better. But they forget and don’t consider other aspects in which young people have more advantages.
Firstly older people don’t recognize that our world is changeable. Every day new devices, equipment and other useful things are appearing. The main advantage is that young people can accept the changes much quickly. As an example recently new software was developed to solve the difficult equation. My professor doesn’t want to study and use it due to its difficulties. He continued to use a paper and a pencil until I showed and explained him this software. As a result time required for solving the equation decreased in several times.
Secondly young mind is more flexible. Young people can find sometimes very strange and unexpected way to solve the problem. Many times I observed how appearing of young man changed the situation for the better at the research group. According to the history we know that many discoveries were done by young people. Isaac Newton developed the laws of motion at the age 25. Marconi created the wireless telegraph at the age 21. Eintein developed the relative theory at the age 35.
Thirdly young people have much more positive energy. This energy can be spent to solve the problem or discover. At the same time young people are also ready to share it. Looking at the young people and their enthusiasm older one don’t give up before troubles. They try to forget the daily problem and learn to fun the life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people know many things to teach the older one.
  

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Here are some suggestions. Many times I heard that young people can’t teach older people anything. And the main argument was that older people lived longer than young one .

  • Here are some suggestions.
  • Many times I heard that young people can’t teach older people anything.
  • And the main argument was that older people lived longer than young one .
  • (You don't know how long they will live until they die.
  • ) As a result older people have more experience and their knowledge is much better.
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Here are some suggestions.

Many times I heard that young people can’t teach older people anything. And the main argument was that older people lived longer than young one. (You don't know how long they will live until they die. - You mean to say "Older people have lived longer than young ones.
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