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Sayoni Santra Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Please rectify..for covering letter..

Hope this mail of mine finds you in good spirit and health.

I wish to work for your esteemed organization and hence forwarding my resume for consideration of job opening for HR profile with 3 or more than 3 years of work experience.

I have earned a two years full time Postgraduate Program in Human Resource Management & Development from XYZ along with additional basic knowledge of SAP and ERP software obtained during professional exposure.

Presently, I am having 3 years and 9 months hand-on professional experience of recruitment and selection, employee induction and orientation, statutory compliance, grievance handling, performance management system, and to some extend in training and development and corporate communication. Future career aspirations include formulating new strategies for talent management, employee retention system and leadership skills. Also, I am exposed to both corporate and shop-floor levels.

Kindly go through my resume for broader outlook of my professional & personal achievements.
  

Top answer

Hi, Are you applying to a western-style company, eg in North America, in a North. American style? If you are, there are a lot of things that need to be changed.

— Clive

  • Hi, Are you applying to a western-style company, eg in North America, in a North.
  • American style?
  • If you are, there are a lot of things that need to be changed.
  • Or are you applying to a company that operates in the context of some other culture?
  • Tell us, so we can offer you better advice.
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Hi,

Are you applying to a western-style company, eg in North America, in a North. American style?
If you are, there are a lot of things that need to be changed.

Or are you applying to a company that operates in the context of some other cult
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Hi. Clive..
I am applying to a company that operates in Asian Culture(India). Please suggest me a better advice.

Thanks & Regards
Sayoni
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Hi,

I am applying to a company that operates in Asian Culture(India). Please suggest me a better advice.
I'm not familiar with how to apply in that culture.

I'll just make some basic edits to what you have written.

Clive.
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