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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Please rectify the phrases

this are some phrases i wrote for jewellery brand is it grammatically right





Every special moment stays in your heart for forever as the sweetest memories.

Let’s celebrate the moment of happiness eternally





Celebrating with you those rare moments of life that spark your memories with glisten sweetness forever





Celebrating the occasion that you are someone special. Endless sweet smiles waiting in delight to make your future years shine bright
  

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My try: Every special moment stays in your heart for forever as the sweetest memories. Let’s celebrate the moment of happiness eternally . Celebrating with you those rare moments of life that spark your memories with glisten sweetness forever.

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  • My try: Every special moment stays in your heart for forever as the sweetest memories.
  • Let’s celebrate the moment of happiness eternally .
  • Celebrating with you those rare moments of life that spark your memories with glisten sweetness forever.
  • I didn't understand this sentence.
  • Celebrating the occasion that you are someone special.
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My try:

Every special moment stays in your heart for forever as the sweetest memories.

Let’s celebrate the moment of happiness eternally.

Celebrating with you those rare moments of life that spark your memories with glisten sweetness forever. I didn't understand this sentence.
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