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Lavinia94 Posted 15 years ago
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Please, rectify my writing errors
Do you like shopping? Have you ever bought any thing that you regretted? Who or what made you buy it.
I just love shopping. I can spend all day going from one shop to another. I adore clothes. I also love stuffed toys of all kinds and sizes. My friends say that I am shopaholic. Once I have some money I feel the need of wasting it all, but in spite of that I think I'm sensible. I don't usually buy things that I'm not going to use, but I remember once having bought a T-shirt that I regretted so much buying. When I tried it on at the shop I liked it, but a month later when I wanted to go out with it on, it didn't suit me! I went to the shop and tried to take the T-shirt back but I couldn't return it. I got upset because it was expensive.
I just love shopping. I can spend all day going from one shop to another. I adore clothes. I also love stuffed toys of all kinds and sizes. My friends say that I am shopaholic. Once I have some money I feel the need of wasting it all, but in spite of that I think I'm sensible. I don't usually buy things that I'm not going to use, but I remember once having bought a T-shirt that I regretted so much buying. When I tried it on at the shop I liked it, but a month later when I wanted to go out with it on, it didn't suit me! I went to the shop and tried to take the T-shirt back but I couldn't return it. I got upset because it was expensive.
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Here are my suggestions. My additions are in bold. Do you like shopping?
- Here are my suggestions.
- My additions are in bold.
- Do you like shopping?
- Have you ever bought anything that you later regretted buying ?
- Who or what made you buy it ?
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Here are my suggestions. My additions are in bold.
Do you like shopping? Have you ever bought anything that you later regretted buying? Who or what made you buy it?
I just love shopping. I can spend all day going from one shop to another. I adore clothes. I also love stuffed toys of all kinds and sizes. My friends say that I am a shopaho
Do you like shopping? Have you ever bought anything that you later regretted buying? Who or what made you buy it?
I just love shopping. I can spend all day going from one shop to another. I adore clothes. I also love stuffed toys of all kinds and sizes. My friends say that I am a shopaho
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