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Musthakahmed1 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Please recorrect it again

Akbar is my friend, he just provided me the concern personal HR's email address. I just wanna apply for the job. Just elaborate things please
  

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If you need to apply a job, you need to sound friendly. The problem of your tone is bigger than your grammar mistakes. I wouldn't want to work with you and please use Chris's suggestion.

— Iris_es

  • If you need to apply a job, you need to sound friendly.
  • The problem of your tone is bigger than your grammar mistakes.
  • I wouldn't want to work with you and please use Chris's suggestion.
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If you need to apply a job, you need to sound friendly. The problem of your tone is bigger than your grammar mistakes. I wouldn't want to work with you and please use Chris's suggestion.
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Musthakahmed1, your infact your English is ok and readable. What you need is sincerity. Try to write it a few times and correct the your mistakes everytime your write. Do not rush.

Chris has provided you a good example in you previous post.
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