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Ahmedm Posted 14 years ago
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Please realign this below para for me.

Dear Sir,

With reference to my interview sessions held for the position of ABC Manager job XYZ, however after two months I got HR regretfully mail.
On that time this is very embarrassing for me and I was greatly passionate about my career dream. whereas really it's good for me to know what are the weak areas in my profile and I need to concentrate on it very seriously.

Now I'm still searching the job and honestly I'm so much interested in this job, whereas in parallel I got the offer from another company in town but I prefer to go with your company.

now again I saw the Manager position is still available at your website, and as per my info construction work should be completed in Q3.
I'd appreciate if you can reconsider my profile for this post.

This mail is also counting on the advice with you for the manager post, can you please suggest the path for joining your company

Many thanks,
MA
  
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