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I have to write a Personal statement for medical school for higher education. The sentence which needs review for correction is below. Please suggest.
I began my first clinical year in medical school with great anticipation as it was the first time we had direct patient interaction. Since my medical school served rural areas it was necessary to provide comprehensive and in-depth care to the patients without the need for frequent referral. This has helped me to diagnose and treat the patients with most common ailments to the widespread Tuberculosis and Rheumatic Fever.
I have to write a Personal statement for medical school for higher education. The sentence which needs review for correction is below. Please suggest.
I began my first clinical year in medical school with great anticipation as it was the first time we had direct patient interaction. Since my medical school served rural areas it was necessary to provide comprehensive and in-depth care to the patients without the need for frequent referral. This has helped me to diagnose and treat the patients with most common ailments to the widespread Tuberculosis and Rheumatic Fever.
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Hi, I began my first clinical year in medical school with great anticipation as it was the first time we had direct patient interaction. Since my medical school served rural areas , it was necessary to provide comprehensive and in-depth care to the patients without the need for frequent referral. This has helped me to diagnose and treat patients with most common ailments, such as widespread Tuberculosis and Rheumatic Fever .
- Hi, I began my first clinical year in medical school with great anticipation as it was the first time we had direct patient interaction.
- Since my medical school served rural areas , it was necessary to provide comprehensive and in-depth care to the patients without the need for frequent referral.
- This has helped me to diagnose and treat patients with most common ailments, such as widespread Tuberculosis and Rheumatic Fever .
- If you need any more help, please write again.
- Best wishes for your future career, Clive
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I began my first clinical year in medical school with great anticipation as it was the first time we had direct patient interaction. Since my medical school served rural areas, it was necessary to provide comprehensive and in-depth care to the patients without the need for frequent referral. This has helped me to diagnose a
I began my first clinical year in medical school with great anticipation as it was the first time we had direct patient interaction. Since my medical school served rural areas, it was necessary to provide comprehensive and in-depth care to the patients without the need for frequent referral. This has helped me to diagnose a
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