Please read my letter and help me to improve it (same as below)

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00English is not my native language (it is spanish) But i did go to school in the US (junior high and high school) now I'm back in Mexico studying my career. I help at the administrative offices and I had to translate an invitation letter (spanish to english). The letter goes to very important businessmen in the US... It was hard because I had to translate it and spanish writting is a lot different. Anyway I did the best I could but it was hard getting the words in English.. can you please tell me how I can improve it. Also, I put convention... but I'm not sure the even in spanish is called ( the 2nd .. 00SFORO 2008 BAJA CALIFORNIA–ASIA: “NEGOCIOS, ECONOMIA Y CULTURA" (00Foro de Asia) which I can only translate to Convention, I'm sure there is another way to call it but I'm not sure how 05000 thank you so much!!02br
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00 With this Letter, CETYS University requests the pleasure of your company to participate at our 201sup^{00nd02sup}00 Annual Convention, 01i00Baja California02i00 – Asia 2008: “Business, Economy and Culture,”00 which will be taking place on November 501sup^{00th02sup}00 2008 at the auditorium of CETYS University in Mexicali, Baja California, Mexico.02br
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00This great event’s main purpose is to share knowledge, ideologies and experiences among the diverse sectors that interact in our society (business sector, educational sector and governmental sector), and that have been influenced in a direct or indirect way by the Asian culture.02br
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00During the event, there will be conferences and different activities about the importance of commercial and cultural relationships between Baja California and Asia. This event is oriented to inform or spread among people from Baja California, culture and experiences that surge in making business with the principal Asian countries.02br
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00It will be a great pleasure and an honor to count with your support and presence, since we consider that your participation will give an added value to the participants at our Convention which are part of the business, academic and public community of our region (Baja California). It will be really appreciated if you can indicate who will be present at the event to give the best attention we can offer.02br
00We are grateful for the attention to this letter and the support that you are able to offer at or 201sup^{00nd02sup}00 Annual Convention 2008, 01i00Baja California02i00 – Asia.00 We are sure that our participants will gain knowledge to the maximum from this Convention.02br
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