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Once upon a time, there was a man who lives in the underworld town. His name is Tom, Tom sought out an adventure to find this magical stick that makes everything true. As Tom seek out the adventure, he saw so many people he has never seen before like weird looking in different ways.

He seen people that look like animals in the face or people that look like shape’s that talk it was everything around him could talk, Tom is walking down the line and he stop this house to get food there was a woman that works in the shop name Ms. Bell she asks how may I help with, Tom just looking for food before I go on my adventure, Ms. Bell ask what adventure, Tom goes on and on telling Ms. Bell about it after Tom told Ms. Bell everything he knew, he left out seek back on his adventure.

Ms. Bell started thinking very hard about If she going to take that adventure, as Ms. Bell thinking hard Tom is now in these woods that are talking about turn around it is not self here, turn around Tom ask the trees where I go, trees say go left you live or go right you will fall in the water, so Tom was stuck in a way that he must find out his own way Tom chose left as he going on the right way, Ms. Bell made her way following Tom, down the talking trees. Tom started getting worried about if he was going to make it before the sun goes down, on the path, there was a cute animal that talks weird in a way the animal start saying I am going to hurt you if you don’t turn around and go back where you came from, Tom did not know what the animal was saying so Tom kept walking down the path the cute little animal kick the mess out of Tom as Tom getting mess over. he started to fight back kicking the mess out of the little animal but, people came out to watch the fight, Ms. Bell took the same way that Tom took as she still following him, she sees him fighting and pass him right up.

By this time Ms. Bell made her way to this very old house. Ms. Bell walks into the house then the door had broken she was scared as was scarcely seen as an old woman the woman asked who are you where are you coming from lady goes on only by asking her questions trying to confuse her trying to convince her to come in so she could eat her, little as no Ms. Bell was only coming for the magic stick so she can make everything come true. Tom comes right along after his little fight yes he won but had to leave right after as Tom walking down He sees the old house and his Bell so he goes in the door is already down he sees the old lady she asked the same questions that she asked so at this point the old lady is trying to eat both of them but they only came for the magic stick The only made them sit down gave him some more in one Cup of water yeah peel Ms. Bell had drunk then the water she passes out In the chair. Tom Freaks out start looking for something to kill the old lady week so there was a drumstick and that was the magic stick so all he had to say abracadabra put this old lady in a bucket lock it forever disappears, Tom Realize that he had the magic stick so he awakened Ms. Bell she asks Tom is that the Majesty stick he said yes, Ms. Bell said I only want one wish and you can keep the stick for yourself Tom said one wish and that’s it Ms. Bell goes on as she asks for her wish and it was to make her shop bigger and better from everyone else’s her wish become true. Tom was very happy that he had to Magic stick to his self so as he has the magic stick all in granting wishes he made his house better he made the underworld cleaner he made sure he had food in his house and he was very grateful for the magical steak as life goes on he had another venture to go to