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Oanh Kiều 2435 Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please read and check my writing on practicing BEC test!!

Part 1

For the car will be ready to use for everyone, we hope you could refill the petrol after using and left it in the company’s car park. Its key should be put in the box being next to the wheel.

Thank you for your cooperation.

Part 2

Thank you for your letter. We sincerely apologize for what has happened. There was a mistake in our deliver system that your goods were send to incorrectly address. We sure that you will receive the product by June 15th with 10% discount on the bill.

If you need more information, don’t hesitate to contact us. We are always looking forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely,

Rose Quinn.

  

Top answer

Hi I will just do Part 1 for now. I thought it was good. My phrasing would be slightly different: - The car will be ready to use for everyone.

— Dave_anon

  • Hi I will just do Part 1 for now.
  • I thought it was good.
  • My phrasing would be slightly different: - The car will be ready to use for everyone.
  • We hope you could refill the petrol after using it and leave it in the company’s car park.
  • Its key should be put in the box next to the steering wheel.
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Hi

I will just do Part 1 for now. I thought it was good. My phrasing would be slightly different:

- The car will be ready to use for everyone. We hope you could refill the petrol after using it and leave it in the company’s car park. Its key should be put in the box next to the steering wheel.

I'm wondering how the next person could get into the car if the keys are in a box

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