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Oanh Kiều 2435 Posted 5 years ago
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Please read and check my writing !!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Fn_6QXxvr7yjUsoIO9ERsJ2HB473KUEX/view?usp=sharing

Dear Ms. Dalton,

Thank you for your letter. As you know, our company has specialized in making computers. So we are always looking for the best components to produce the good one. Your products really appealed to us. We appreciated it. However, your new designs were just come out which were a strange one in market. Whether could you discount of your products to reasonable prices so that we would buy and produce with a huge number of them. To identify for sure, should we have a meeting at Hall room in Paston Hotel on Saturday, January 12th?

I’m looking forward to hearing you soon.

Sincerely,

Buffet.

  

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Hi, Oanh Ki?u 2435. Welcome to EF.

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Dear Ms. Dalton,

Thank you for your letter. As you know, our company has specialized (wrong verb tense. Write what your company does now, not what they did in the past.) in making computers. So we are always looking for the best components (Mrs. Dalton's company is not offering computer parts, but accessories. You have not u

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