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Please read and correct the following passage if there are any.

I'd be obliged if anybody should help me out.

In the first place, the Heaven and the Earth were as if they had been the inns to provide accommodations for all kind of travelers. The days and months were as if they had been never-stopping travelers. Compared with them, the ephemeral life of human beings are short time empty dream. How much of life time do we have chances to enjoy happy time. I hear that in old days they spent happy time playing out by holding lights until late at night. It is really understandable. Much more, it is the time of spring when the bright and clear air invites us, with the haze hanging over hills and fields, and the Creater lets us use the ability for poetry. Why shall we have a feat to enjoy ourselves, shall we not?

  

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"In the first place (or In the beginning), the Heaven and the Earth were as if they had been the inns to provide accommodations for all kind(s) of travelers. The days and months (passed) were as if they had been there were never-stopping travelers. Compared with them, the ephemeral (temporary) life of humans beings are a short time of an empty dream.

— Amanda Hudson

  • "In the first place (or In the beginning), the Heaven and the Earth were as if they had been the inns to provide accommodations for all kind(s) of travelers.
  • The days and months (passed) were as if they had been there were never-stopping travelers.
  • Compared with them, the ephemeral (temporary) life of humans beings are a short time of an empty dream.
  • ) I hear that in old days (in the old or early days , ) they spent happy time joyful times playing out by the holding lights until late at night.
  • It is really (completely) understandable.
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"In the first place (or In the beginning), the Heaven and the Earth were as if they had been the inns to provide accommodations for all kind(s) of travelers. The days and months (passed) were as if they had been there were never-stopping travelers. Compared with them, the ephemeral (tempo

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