please Re write the above sentences, with proper grammar.
a) “In this design model some imperfections in the metal castings.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
b) “Before outsourcing the design should have a thorough idea regarding the company which is making the product.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
c) “Because the internet connection is slow.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
d) “Colin on the other hand decides to take the matter to Jack-the manager when he returns.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
e) “Both companies managed to reduce operating costs because they can find more efficient ways to bring their product to the market.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ ______________________________________
f) “Mike recognized that and produces the same model with different features.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
g) “Spectrum Brands are a global consumer products company.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ ______________________________________________
h) “My strategies is to manufacture the product.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ ______________________
i) “The team members were selected with the desire to absolve itself of blame of any sort.” Rewrite:________________________________________
j) “Once the project is done, no one will care in the least who said what at a meeting, or the reasons for a decision.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
k) “In order to write well, you need to allow yourself plenty of time to prepare the assignment, proofread carefully and more than once, and using writing reference books.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ ______________________
l) “Nortel faced major losses which they wiped out most of the case and reserves of the company.” Rewrite:_________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
m) “There is a case study telling about in class about a company provided wireless services.” Rewrite:________________________________________
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There are some imperfections in the metal castings of this design model a) "In this design model some imperfections in the metal castings." Rewrite: There are some imperfections in the metal castings of this design model b) "Before outsourcing the design should have a thorough idea regarding the company which is making the product." Rewrite: The company which is making the
Hi, OK. Please clarify what you are trying to do here. Is there some specific way that you are supposed to rewrite these? Are you supposed to be practicing some particular grammar point? Sentences can be rewritten in lots of ways.
Can you add words? Or change words?
In addition, some of the sentences you are supposed to rewrite do not make good or complete sense.