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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Please rate my writing skills
Hi! i really want to improve my to write like a professional in my simple day-to-day correspondences.
Would you please rate my blow email and tell me what i am doing wrong? Thank You!
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Dear X,
I've contacted Dr. Z yesterday. Issues regarding surgical gloves, honey and other potential market for Australian surgical equipments were discussed.
According to Dr. Z's recommendation for surgical gloves, we have to check if the prospect company's are having an agent in Iran or not and if they are willing to grand sole-agency to us. then samples and prices should be required for the
project feasibility to be evaluated. Plus, as proposed, the ideal profit margin for surgical gloves is % 40-60.
Apparently he was no much found of the idea of exporting honey to Dubai, however he asked me to postpone our meeting till early Ordibehesht while your brother is here to further analyse market for other goods such as honey or surgical equipments.
So, should i take the Surgical gloves case to the next level?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
_____________________________________...
Would you please rate my blow email and tell me what i am doing wrong? Thank You!
_____________________________________...
Dear X,
I've contacted Dr. Z yesterday. Issues regarding surgical gloves, honey and other potential market for Australian surgical equipments were discussed.
According to Dr. Z's recommendation for surgical gloves, we have to check if the prospect company's are having an agent in Iran or not and if they are willing to grand sole-agency to us. then samples and prices should be required for the
project feasibility to be evaluated. Plus, as proposed, the ideal profit margin for surgical gloves is % 40-60.
Apparently he was no much found of the idea of exporting honey to Dubai, however he asked me to postpone our meeting till early Ordibehesht while your brother is here to further analyse market for other goods such as honey or surgical equipments.
So, should i take the Surgical gloves case to the next level?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
_____________________________________...
Top answer
I've I contacted (you've given a specific time, so the present perfect cannot be used) plural of company: companies are having have an agent in Iran grand grant sole-agency then T hen would should be required no much found not very fond period after Dubai the pronoun I is always capitalized
- I've I contacted (you've given a specific time, so the present perfect cannot be used) plural of company: companies are having have an agent in Iran grand grant sole-agency then T hen would should be required no much found not very fond period after Dubai the pronoun I is always capitalized
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plural of company: companies
period after Dubai
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