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Zunayeed Kamal Posted 11 years ago
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Most Experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future

Anybody might encounter difficult experiences at any stages of life.

The best way to tackle down a difficult situation is to is learn from it

using it as a weapon to challenge future. In my opinion, encountering

difficulties make people better to succeed in life.

Obstacle is something that people has to face in their everyday life

making people stronger for the future. A person who faces obstacles

today, by hook or by crook he will get to know how to tackle is down in

the next encounter or he might become more stronger when he has to

lead his life in future. A cancer patient, for instance, who take chemo

therapy and get a new life, know the value of experience to the

backbone. As he faces difficulty in life, no doubt he will be more

capable to face difficulties and become successful. So, obstacle is

something that become precious lessons for the future.

To be successful in life, one has to work hard continually and

unwaveringly which is a great experience indeed. There is a proverb: no

pains, no gains. Considering and analyzing the life of successful person,

we can see that he or she has to struggle hard to get the highest apex of

success. Jack Ma, the founder of Ali Baba, the Chinese tycoon, is a

perfect embodiment of this, as he could not get a job as a waiter in KFC

once in his career. But, rather than giving up in, he worked

hard continuously, as a result of that, he became one of the richest men

in the world. Because of that hard work at difficult time, his life story

becomes a valuable lessons ont only for himself but also for the people

all around the world.
  

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Hello, Zunayeed Kamal—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registeriing. You need to re-post your essay without pre-formatting so that we can see your paragraph divisions.
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Topic: Most Experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future

Anybody might encounter difficult experiences at any stages of life. The best way to tackle down a difficult situation is to is learn from it using it as a weapon to challenge future. In my opinion, encountering difficulties make people better to succeed in life.

Obstacle
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Anybody might encounter difficult experiences at any stages of life. The best way to tackle down a difficult situation is to is learn from it using it as a weapon to challenge future. In my opinion, encountering difficulties make people better to succeed in life.

Obstacle

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