More than half of the obese students answered "Yes,we are overeating", and about 47%answered "no". My problem is that I find "we" strange and sounds odd, don't know why though.Also, I'm proofreading the text for someone else so I try not to change a lot . Hopefully, you can help me punctuate it as it is....
More than half of the obese students answered "Yes, we are overeating", and about 47%answered "No". My problem is that I find "we" strange and sounds odd, don't know why though. It's fine. Also, I'm proofreading the text for someone else so I try not to change a lot . Hopefully, you can help me punctuate it as it i