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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Please, provide me with some help. THX

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00I need to prepare a presentation in PowerPoint and explain why they should choose me for the position they offered (District Manager). I tried and this is the result. Could you please help me with this and correct it. I am pretty far from being good in English but I must prepare this presentation in this language. Thank you in advance for any advice.02br
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00Carol02br
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01b00Jon Doe – The best choice.02b02br
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00You ask me why?02br
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00Because he is the leader!02br
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00He is the only one, extraordinary candidate for the position of a District Manager.02br
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00In my opinion the 01b00LEADER02b00 must be:02br
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01b00L02b00earned. Provided with excellent knowledge in Human Resource Management area. Presented with essential practical experience as well with useful skills when dealing with clients and of course with excellent results. 02br
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01b00E02b00nergetic. Enthusiastic and dynamic in achieving personal and team goals. Moreover, inspire and motivate the others to go beyond what is required.02br
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01b00A02b00ble. Possessed outstanding ability to cope with difficult situations. Efficiently when working under the pressure. 02br
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01b00D02b00eveloping. Constantly taking its knowledge and skills onto higher level and follow the actual strategy of the company. Willing to assume increased responsibility.02br
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01b00E02b00ffective. Successfully working independently or as a member of a team to reach all tasks assigned to him without ongoing supervision.02br
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01b00R02b00esponsible for completing assigned task and the results of the team.02br
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00Jon Doe posses all this attributes and I believe these makes him an excellent candidate for the District Manager position you are offering. 02br
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01b01i00or02i02b02br
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00I believe that Jon Doe has the background and qualifications you are seeking in a District Manager.02br
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00I am confident that if you choose him I will exceed your expectations and he will contribute to the ongoing success of your company.02br
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00Jon Doe – he is the one you need!02br
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00He is the leader!010id1
  

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02br 02br 00In my opinion the 01b 00LEADER02b 00 must be:02br 02br 01b 00L02b 00earned01b 00: 02b 00Provided with excellent knowledge in 01b 00the area of02b 00 Human Resource Management . 01b 00Equipped02b 00 with essential practical experience 01b 00and 02b 00useful skills when dealing with clients and of course01b 00 producing02b 00 excellent results. 02br 02br 01b 00E02b 00nergetic01b 00:02b 00 Enthusiastic and dynamic in achieving personal and team goals.

— Mister Micawber

  • 02br 02br 00In my opinion the 01b 00LEADER02b 00 must be:02br 02br 01b 00L02b 00earned01b 00: 02b 00Provided with excellent knowledge in 01b 00the area of02b 00 Human Resource Management .
  • 01b 00Equipped02b 00 with essential practical experience 01b 00and 02b 00useful skills when dealing with clients and of course01b 00 producing02b 00 excellent results.
  • 02br 02br 01b 00E02b 00nergetic01b 00:02b 00 Enthusiastic and dynamic in achieving personal and team goals.
  • 02br 02br 01b 00A02b 00ble01b 00:02b 00 Possessed 01b 00of02b 00 outstanding ability to cope with difficult situations.
  • 01b 00Efficient02b 00 when working 01b 00under pressure02b 00.
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1b00Jon Doe – The best choice.02b02br
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01b00Why?02b02br
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00Because he is 01b00a02b00 leader!02br
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00He is the01b00 best 02b00candidate for the position01b00 of District02b00 Manager.02br
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00In my opinion
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0Thank you very much Mister Micaweber! I appreciate it a lot! You made my day!02br
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00Best wishes,02br
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00Carol0-
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