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Kingston123 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Please proofread this sentence
On a boat, Mr. Dawson successfully evades the enemy plane by instructing correctly to the sailor. Then Soldier
on that boat asks Mr. Dawson a question.
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On a boat, Mr. Dawson successfully evades the enemy plane by instructing the sailor correctly. Then a soldier on the boat asks Mr.
- On a boat, Mr.
- Dawson successfully evades the enemy plane by instructing the sailor correctly.
- Then a soldier on the boat asks Mr.
- Dawson a question.
- This is now correct English, but I don't know how well it fits your context.
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On a boat, Mr. Dawson successfully evades the enemy plane by instructing the sailor correctly. Then a soldier on the boat asks Mr. Dawson a question.
This is now correct English, but I don't know how well it fits your context.
A big boat is a ship.
The chief sailor is the captain.
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