Please proofread this sentence.
Sentence: Mac is the coach and his player ready to play his strike in baseball. Player got the chance but he didn't hit the ball and bend after bowler delivery.
I have two doubts:
Should I put "he" or "player" before didn't hit the ball"?
Should I have to mention both: 1) he didn't hit the ball 2) bend after bowler delivery
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Sorry, but this is not a good sentence. Here are some edits, and some comments on parts I don't understand. Mac is the coach and his player is at bat ..
- Sorry, but this is not a good sentence.
- Here are some edits, and some comments on parts I don't understand.
- Mac is the coach and his player is at bat ..
- The player got the chance but he didn't hit the ball and bend after the pitcher's delivery.
- ' Bend' is not a suitable word.
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Sorry, but this is not a good sentence. Here are some edits, and some comments on parts I don't understand.
Mac is the coach and his player is at bat.. The player got the chance but he didn't hit the ball and bend after the pitcher's delivery. 'Bend' is not a suitable word. What do you mean?
I have two doubts:
Should I put "he" or "player" before
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