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Mitsuo23 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Please Proofread this: 57 words.
Hi, would you proofread the sentences below.
Revenue management is significant and permanent issue for our company, and we consider it's important (critical?) to seek the best solution at all times.
In the future, we assume that we will have more opportunities to discuss about the research this time and also other things afterwards, and we are certainly looking forward to it.
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Thanks!
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Revenue management is significant and permanent issue for our company, and we consider it's important (critical?) to seek the best solution at all times.
In the future, we assume that we will have more opportunities to discuss about the research this time and also other things afterwards, and we are certainly looking forward to it.
=+=+=+=
Thanks!
M
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I have underlined some problem areas: Revenue management is significant and permanent issue for our company, and we consider it's important/critical to seek the best solution at all times. In the future , we assume that we will have more opportunities to discuss about the research this time and also other things afterwards , and we are certainly looking forward to it.
- I have underlined some problem areas: Revenue management is significant and permanent issue for our company, and we consider it's important/critical to seek the best solution at all times.
- In the future , we assume that we will have more opportunities to discuss about the research this time and also other things afterwards , and we are certainly looking forward to it.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
Revenue management is significant and permanent issue for our company, and we consider it's important/critical to seek the best solution at all times.
In the future, we assume that we will have more opportunities to discuss about the research this time and also other things afterwards, and we
Revenue management is significant and permanent issue for our company, and we consider it's important/critical to seek the best solution at all times.
In the future, we assume that we will have more opportunities to discuss about the research this time and also other things afterwards, and we
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Hi,
You need to rewrite both of these sentences.
Revenue management is a significant and permanent issue for our company, and we consider it is important (critical? either word) to seek the best solution at all times.
Some concerns about vocabulary.
The word 'issue' is often used to mean 'a problem'. In addition, an 'issue' is usually something that gets resolv
You need to rewrite both of these sentences.
Revenue management is a significant and permanent issue for our company, and we consider it is important (critical? either word) to seek the best solution at all times.
Some concerns about vocabulary.
The word 'issue' is often used to mean 'a problem'. In addition, an 'issue' is usually something that gets resolv
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Thank you very much, Clive. I appreciate you.
I wonder when my journey of mastering English ends..
I wonder when my journey of mastering English ends..
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Hi,
Would you check my another post? : Would means can't? always true?
I hope I'm not asking too much.
Thanks,
M
Would you check my another post? : Would means can't? always true?
I hope I'm not asking too much.
Thanks,
M
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