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Kingston123 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Please proofread the sentence.

Sentence: Sheela's man, Michael brings a man to Sheela to kill Benson.

My Aim: People should understand Sheela send Michael to bring a man so she can kill Benson with help of this man.

  

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Do we already know that Michael is Sheela's man? If so, skip that part and just say: Michael brings a man to Sheela to help her kill Benson.

  • Do we already know that Michael is Sheela's man?
  • If so, skip that part and just say: Michael brings a man to Sheela to help her kill Benson.
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Do we already know that Michael is Sheela's man? If so, skip that part and just say:

Michael brings a man to Sheela to help her kill Benson.

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