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Ztq3 Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please proofread my short paragraph

America is a multi cultural nation and a land of multiple languages. In my opinion, America could be considered as both a melting pot and a salad bowl. People from all over the world came to the U.S, to have a new and a better life with a vision of hope for their future. America is like a salad bowl because even though immigrants adapt the American life, they still do their own culture and traditions and pass to the next generation. America is a melting pot, where these different nationalities of immigrants came together and enrich each other to form the American way of life.
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kolokoy to have a new and a better life , with a vision of hope for their future Add the comma just to make it read a little more smoothly.

— Philip

  • kolokoy to have a new and a better life , with a vision of hope for their future Add the comma just to make it read a little more smoothly.
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kolokoy to have a new and a better life, with a vision of hope for their future
Add the comma just to make it read a little more smoothly.
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multi-cultural
kolokoyIn my opinion, America could be considered as both a melting pot and a salad bowl.
That is not your opinion: calling the US a melting pot or a salad bowl is a cliché.

adapt to American life
adhere to their own culture and traditions
pass them on to the next
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Thanks Philip and Mistermicawber.
Volunteers like you on this site is a big help for immigrants/foreigners like me. ?
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