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Mezzopiano Posted 7 years ago
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Please proofread my answer for the question about antibiotics

Question: Imagine that I'm a farmer raising hogs. I know that using antibiotics in your feed will increase the growth rate of my animals and reduce the frequency of their sickness. BUt I also know that regularly using antibiotics in feed is a contributor to possible future health crises in the form of antibiotic resistance. WOuld you voluntarily stop adding antibiotic to your animals's feed?
Answer: I would not use antibiotics for my animals. The reason is that there is a very high chance of antibiotic resistance, especially when I don't use the antibiotics properly, and when it happens, I will need to shut down my whole farm and lose all profit. Moreover, feeding the animals with healthy food and protect them from the climate change will be enough to prevent their sickness.

  

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You have mixed up the pronouns "I" and "you" so badly that the passage makes no sense. Question: Imagine that you are a farmer raising hogs. I know that using antibiotics in your hog feed will increase the growth rate of your animals and reduce the frequency of their sickness.

  • You have mixed up the pronouns "I" and "you" so badly that the passage makes no sense.
  • Question: Imagine that you are a farmer raising hogs.
  • I know that using antibiotics in your hog feed will increase the growth rate of your animals and reduce the frequency of their sickness.
  • BUt I also know that regularly using antibiotics in feed is a contributor to a possible future health crises in the form of antibiotic resistance.
  • WO uld you voluntarily stop adding antibiotics to your animals's feed?
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You have mixed up the pronouns "I" and "you" so badly that the passage makes no sense.


Question: Imagine that you are a farmer raising hogs. I know that using antibiotics in your hog feed will increase the growth rate of your animals and reduce the freque

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