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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Hi!

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Dear Manager and Recruiter

I am writing in reference to the position of Product Engineer (Electrical/Electronics) at Madrid.

I have been working in control system reliability for the last two years and a half, and I have found the experience extremely rewarding. As a reliability department member my labor has been focused both in building and improving reliability models for new designs, and on increasing the availability of the currently installed MILSTA turbines fleet.

For nearly a half of my work life, I have been carrying out simultaneously management and technical tasks. At the same time, I have faced up deep changes either in corporative organization and procedures, in manager and department responsibilities, or in project goals. Due to this I have specially developed abilities on communication, agreement reach, and foresight of troubles both on technical solutions and in operation.

Please take the time to consider my attached resume. I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to meet with you personally to discuss what I have to bring to the position at Microsoft at this time.

Regards,
  

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Dear Manager and Recruite r, I am writing in reference to the position of Product Engineer (Electrical/Electronics) at Madrid. I have been working in control system reliability for the last two and a half years, and I have found the experience extremely rewarding. As a reliability department member, my work has focused both on building and improving reliability models for new designs, and on increasing the availability of the currently installed MILSTA turbine fleet.

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  • Dear Manager and Recruite r, I am writing in reference to the position of Product Engineer (Electrical/Electronics) at Madrid.
  • I have been working in control system reliability for the last two and a half years, and I have found the experience extremely rewarding.
  • As a reliability department member, my work has focused both on building and improving reliability models for new designs, and on increasing the availability of the currently installed MILSTA turbine fleet.
  • For nearly half of my work life, I have been carrying out management and technical tasks simultaneously, and I have faced major changes in corporate organization, in managerial and departmental responsibilities, and in project goals , so I have developed exceptional abilities in communication, negotiation , and anticipation of difficulties with technical solutions and operations.
  • Please consider my attached resume.
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Dear Manager and Recruiter,

I am writing in reference to the position of Product Engineer (Electrical/Electronics) at Madrid.

I have been working in control system reliability for the last two and a half years, and I have found the experience extremely rewarding. As a reliability department member, my work has focused both on building and improving re
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Thank you very very very much!!!
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