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Knightofsports Posted 13 years ago
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Good day! It'd be cool if you could include the games I've requested for, and you can keep the Heat game for your own enjoyment. I believe the season schedule comes out at the end of this month and I'll give you a call around then to discuss further about what you'd like to do with the tickets. I'm currently in Santa Barbara, but my parents live in the San Gabriel Valley, so I'm always around the Los Angeles Area. Furthermore, I'm looking for an apartment in the downtown LA/Wilshire neighborhood, because that's where I'd like to settle in a year or two... I have my eyes on the Solair Wilshire high rise that was constructed in 08', but anyway, that's neither here nor there...

Can someone please take a look at this? Thank you!
  

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Good day! It'd be cool if you could include the games I've requested for , and you can keep the Heat game for your own enjoyment. I believe the season schedule comes out at the end of this month, and I'll give you a call around then to discuss further about what you'd like to do with the tickets.

— CalifJim

  • Good day!
  • It'd be cool if you could include the games I've requested for , and you can keep the Heat game for your own enjoyment.
  • I believe the season schedule comes out at the end of this month, and I'll give you a call around then to discuss further about what you'd like to do with the tickets.
  • I'm currently in Santa Barbara, but my parents live in the San Gabriel Valley so I'm always around the Los Angeles Area.
  • Furthermore, I'm looking for an apartment in the downtown LA/Wilshire neighborhood because that's where I'd like to settle in a year or two...
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Good day! It'd be cool if you could include the games I've requested for, and you can keep the Heat game for your own enjoyment. I believe the season schedule comes out at the end of this month, and I'll give you a call around then to discuss further about what you'd like to do with the tickets. I'm currently in Santa Barbara, but my parents live in the San Gabriel Valley so
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CalifJimGood day! It'd be cool if you could include the games I've requested for, and you can keep the Heat game for your own enjoyment. I believe the season schedule comes out at the end of this month, and I'll give you a call around then to discuss further about what you'd like to do with the tickets. I'm currently in Santa Barbara, but my parents live in the San Gabrie
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