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Learnathon Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please proofread.

First quarter: Y'all saw the floater that was 'no good'? U know how hard it is to do that? How much u have to play to have that sort of feel for the game? Oh boy...he's GOOD all right...and he CAN be great. He is basketball, what I mean by that is, he knows the game so well that, he knows exactly what to do when he's on the court. Basketball is his home, God's taken him home, the journey ain't over, but he's definitely where he belongs. We're all overjoyed and making a raucous, but why are we pretending to be surprised? For those of you who's been playing basketball and really know the game, should know by watching Jeremy Lin that not only is he fundamentally sound, but he's a floor general, like a quarterback, so your understanding of the game has to be high, but in the case of Jeremy Lin, it's superior. Look, he's obviously on fire and in the zone right now and it's a beautiful thing, but come on boys and girls, he's an athlete and not to discredit what he's been doing, but hey..... sometimes when you got it, u got it...basketball is second nature to him. He's no different from a Chris Paul(CLIPS NEWBIE), Rajon Rondo, Deron Williams, Derrick Rose(Go BuLLS!!Sorry, it's been 20 years...I'm loyal as F*) um...u get my drift... Dude... Wait, did u see that piercing glare in his eyes... The guy's got funnel vision right now and the only thing that's unrestricted is the basketball court.

Thank you again.
  

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Hi, You are asking us to proofread something that includes the word 'u' ? What level of English are you trying to write? Clive

  • Hi, You are asking us to proofread something that includes the word 'u' ?
  • What level of English are you trying to write?
  • Clive
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Hi,

You are asking us to proofread something that includes the word 'u' ?
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CliveHi,You are asking us to proofread something that includes the word 'u' ? What level of English are you trying to write? Clive
Sorry, I know it's very casual/informal writing, but some pointers on grammar, punctuation, and do all sentences make sense, am I expressing myself clearly.
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Hi,

Sorry, but I don't enjoy correcting blog-style English. The problem is that I may waste my time correcting things that may just be cases where you know the rule but don't feel like following it. Like the correct spelling of 'you'.

If you want to take the time to rewrite it in
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CliveHi,Sorry, but I don't enjoy correcting blog-style English. The problem is that I may waste my time correcting things that may just be cases where you know the rule but don't feel like following it. Like the correct spelling of 'you'.If you want to take the time to rewrite it in English that is as correct as you can make it, I'd be happy to comment further.Clive
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Hi,

OK, but you start, eg by correcting all the uses of u.
And remove the excessive no of ...
And do you know a better form of ain't? F* ?
And why do words like BuLLS have these extra capita
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CliveHi,OK, but you start, eg by correcting all the uses of u.And remove the excessive no of ... And do you know a better form of ain't? F* ?And why do words like BuLLS have these extra capitals?And then repost, if you wish to.Clive
Hi Clive,

Aside from the slangs and extra superlatives, does the paragraph actually make sense?
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Hi,

Sorry, I'm not going to waste any more time on this.

Clive

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