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Flower1234 Posted 15 years ago
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I am trying to write a letter to the manager to see if I can get her advice on improving my resume. Thank you
"Thank you for your email. I am disappointed that my resume was not selected by your supervisor to be one of the shortlisted candidates for the second interview. I would like to improve my resume and any suggestions you give would be appreciated."
"Thank you for your email. I am disappointed that my resume was not selected by your supervisor to be one of the shortlisted candidates for the second interview. I would like to improve my resume and any suggestions you give would be appreciated."
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Is your company formal or informal? In many cases an informal note could get you more of the type of support you are seeking. Something like this...
- Is your company formal or informal?
- In many cases an informal note could get you more of the type of support you are seeking.
- Something like this...
- Thank you for letting me know.
- I was a little disappointed that I was not selected to go through to the second round.
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Is your company formal or informal? In many cases an informal note could get you more of the type of support you are seeking. Something like this...
Thank you for letting me know. I was a little disappointed that I was not selected to go through to the second round. I suspect my resume could do with a lot of polishing. If you are able to offer me some suggestions on how to improve it, I'd
Thank you for letting me know. I was a little disappointed that I was not selected to go through to the second round. I suspect my resume could do with a lot of polishing. If you are able to offer me some suggestions on how to improve it, I'd
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