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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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After receiving a letter from Doctor X and his Staff, I’ve decided that what happened to me cannot be left undisclosed and my story is just as important as anyone else’s. I’ve had three Rhinoplasty procedures done by Dr. X and all I’m left with is an oddly shaped nose, two very noticeable scalp scars on both sides of my temple and a terrible suture scar behind my ear caused by poor stitch work.
Now they send me a letter telling me I signed a contract stating I shan’t tell anybody about what happened to me. And if I do, they have the right to disclose my information. After all this I could care less about what they would like to divulge about me.
I paid $10,000+ with the promise that if a revision is needed, there would be no charge for a secondary surgery. And of course a second surgery was done and at the time of it he charged me an additional $3000, like I was really going to object to it a few seconds before the operation. After the 3rd and last procedure thanks for making my nose crooked in the 2nd surgery, the stitching behind the back of my left ear was done very clumsily, so I got an infection from it and I didn’t even bother to mention it to him, because by then I knew I wasn’t going to see him again.
Doctor X & staff, you can do as you please with my information, but this just shows how reputable doctors are not all good human beings. You pretend to care about your patients but when the time comes, you’re all for the money, but who isn’t in our day and age. That’s why so many people are digging to china to fatten their bank accounts. Shame on you.
After receiving a letter from Doctor X and his Staff, I’ve decided that what happened to me cannot be left undisclosed and my story is just as important as anyone else’s. I’ve had three Rhinoplasty procedures done by Dr. X and all I’m left with is an oddly shaped nose, two very noticeable scalp scars on both sides of my temple and a terrible suture scar behind my ear caused by poor stitch work.
Now they send me a letter telling me I signed a contract stating I shan’t tell anybody about what happened to me. And if I do, they have the right to disclose my information. After all this I could care less about what they would like to divulge about me.
I paid $10,000+ with the promise that if a revision is needed, there would be no charge for a secondary surgery. And of course a second surgery was done and at the time of it he charged me an additional $3000, like I was really going to object to it a few seconds before the operation. After the 3rd and last procedure thanks for making my nose crooked in the 2nd surgery, the stitching behind the back of my left ear was done very clumsily, so I got an infection from it and I didn’t even bother to mention it to him, because by then I knew I wasn’t going to see him again.
Doctor X & staff, you can do as you please with my information, but this just shows how reputable doctors are not all good human beings. You pretend to care about your patients but when the time comes, you’re all for the money, but who isn’t in our day and age. That’s why so many people are digging to china to fatten their bank accounts. Shame on you.
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After receiving a letter from Doctor X and his staff, I’ve decided that what happened to me cannot be left undisclosed and that my story is just as important as anyone else’s. I’ve had three rhinoplasty procedures done by Dr. X, and all I’m left with is an oddly shaped nose, two very noticeable scalp scars on both sides of my temple, and a terrible suture scar behind my left ear caused by poor stitch work.
- After receiving a letter from Doctor X and his staff, I’ve decided that what happened to me cannot be left undisclosed and that my story is just as important as anyone else’s.
- I’ve had three rhinoplasty procedures done by Dr.
- X, and all I’m left with is an oddly shaped nose, two very noticeable scalp scars on both sides of my temple, and a terrible suture scar behind my left ear caused by poor stitch work.
- Now they send me a letter telling me that I had signed a contract stating I cannot tell anybody about what happened to me, and if I do, they have the right to disclose any information they have about me.
- After all this, I could care less about what they would like to divulge about me.
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After receiving a letter from Doctor X and his staff, I’ve decided that what happened to me cannot be left undisclosed and that my story is just as important as anyone else’s. I’ve had three rhinoplasty procedures done by Dr. X, and all I’m left with is an oddly shaped nose, two very noticeable scalp scars on both sides of my temple, and a terrible suture scar behind my left ear caused by poor st
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