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A recent report from World Health Organisation, utters that almost 40% people of the world population are below poverty line, and they are striving for food and health related issues. Some argue that the local government of poorer nations have to take necessary actions to mitigate these problems. However, I believe that the developed nations have to support these countries for educations, medicines and food to bring up these people.
In most African countries and few Asian countries, people are struggling for their basic needs, especially for food, good health and education. Many people are affected by health related problems and diseases. Children lost their life in recent times in Somalia because of the unavailability of proper food and nutrition. The local government do not have enough fund and technologies to tackle these issues and indeed, the bigger nations should give a hand to them in a humanity ground. In recent time, many developed countries are helping these countries by providing food and medicines through direct government funding. In addition to that, there are many NGOs are also helping them from the fund collected from people in many parts of the world.
Another problem the poorer nations are facing is the lack of education. Most children are not going to schools and some places there are no proper schools where children can study. Education is imperative for children that can resolve these problems in the long run when they get a job after their study. As I said earlier, support from developed nations for education is vital to bring up poorer nations.
To conclude, we cannot help everyone but everyone can help someone. By providing adequate support from bigger nations and people around the world, I have confident that we can attain poor free nations on our earth.
  

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A recent report from World Health Organisation , (no comma) states utters that almost 40% people of the world 's population are below the poverty line, and they have are striving for food and health related issues. Some argue that the local government of poorer nations has to take necessary actions to mitigate these problems. However, I believe that the developed nations have to support these countries, giving them education , medicine and food to bring up these people up out of poverty .

  • A recent report from World Health Organisation , (no comma) states utters that almost 40% people of the world 's population are below the poverty line, and they have are striving for food and health related issues.
  • Some argue that the local government of poorer nations has to take necessary actions to mitigate these problems.
  • However, I believe that the developed nations have to support these countries, giving them education , medicine and food to bring up these people up out of poverty .
  • In most African countries and a few Asian countries, people are struggling for their basic needs, especially for food, good health and education.
  • Many people are affected by health related problems and diseases.
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A recent report from World Health Organisation, (no comma) states utters that almost 40% people of the world's population are below the poverty line, and they have are striving for food and health related issues. Some argue that the local government of poorer nations has to tak

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