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Hungry Posted 19 years ago
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Please please please help me urgently!!!!

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00To obtain a position within an existing or new call center where I can enhance my experience and contribute my skills to ensure the center exceeds expectations for superior customer service, maximum revenue generation, high agent productivity, call efficiency, high attendance, low turnover, and budget adherence.0-
  

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0There are no obvious grammatical mistakes, but it's a little over-blown. If you want to be one of agents, it's not very likely that in your first job there, you will affect attendance, turnover, or budget, nor revenue. You won't be able to "ensure" any of these things.02br
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00... to help the center exceed expectations for superior customer service and agent productivity.
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0Thanks a lot for your interest in helping me, GG! It's so nice and sweet of you!05002br
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0I would still stick with "customer service and efficiency" and leave out the economic success. But you can leave it in, of course, if you really believe you can help achieve that.0-
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