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Kuznetsova7204 Posted 13 years ago
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During recent decades, major percentage of deaths and injuries was caused by car accidents. Careless youth is considered to be the main source of the problem. Some people claim that the decision could be an early driving education. Personally, I completely agree with that idea.
The main argument for me is that the younger someone is, the better he memorizes information. That is the reason why the most important life skills should be learned at school. It is apparent to everybody as well as the importance of driving knowledge and experience. Therefore it has to become a mandatory lesson for pupils equally with mathematics and physical education. Most teenagers are intended to take special driving courses anyway, so it is obvious that this activity shall have its part in schools’ curriculum. But yet, there is another even more significant reason.
Accidents on the roads are principally occurred with a participation of a non-experienced or careless drivers. Some of them drive far beyond the speed limit, others do not pay attention on rules, regardless the dangers. Throughout centuries , youngsters have wanted to express their freedom and independence, and now cars provide such possibility. Those who receive an auto as a present after graduation are most likely to get into trouble as they always have a desire to show their maturity. However, it can be clearly seen that a great deal of them are simply children who are definitely not ready for responsibility.
Nevertheless, these young drivers can be teached properly in order to prevent their carelessness and overconfidence. If they receive these skills from schooll classes, they would be more attentive and respectful to laws in the future. I believe that public’s concerns will vanish after making drive courses obligatory in every school.
  

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Hello Kuznetsova; I am not sure exactly what your question is. The paragraph shows a good grasp of basic vocabulary and sentence structure, but it is certainly not written by a native speaker. ) Some of the sentences do not make sense at all.

  • Hello Kuznetsova; I am not sure exactly what your question is.
  • The paragraph shows a good grasp of basic vocabulary and sentence structure, but it is certainly not written by a native speaker.
  • ) Some of the sentences do not make sense at all.
  • That's just my honest opinion.
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Hello Kuznetsova;

I am not sure exactly what your question is.

The paragraph shows a good grasp of basic vocabulary and sentence structure, but it is certainly not written by a native speaker. There are many small mistakes that are give-aways (such as using "teached" rather than "taught," the misuse of articles and the dummy "it", and incorrect word selections.) Some of the sen

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