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Tenacious Learner Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please need paragraph correction. Unit 9 (4)?

Hi teachers,
Could you correct this paragraph please?
It is going to rain and Julia hasn’t got an umbrella. “I’m going to get very wet If that bus doesn’t come soon!” she is saying to herself. She doesn’t know it yet, but the driver of that car is going to stop and he is going to offer her a lift. The driver is the manager’s son. Is he going to be Julia’s new boyfriend?

Thanks in advance.
  

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The grammar is fine. It is going to rain , and Julia hasn't got an umbrella. " she is saying to herself.

  • The grammar is fine.
  • It is going to rain , and Julia hasn't got an umbrella.
  • " she is saying to herself.
  • She doesn’t know it yet, but the driver of that car is going to stop , and he is going to offer her a lift.
  • The driver is the manager’s son.
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The grammar is fine.

It is going to rain, and Julia hasn't got an umbrella. "I'm going to get very wet if that bus doesn't come soon!" she is saying to herself. She doesn’t know it yet, but the driver of that car is going to stop, and he is going to offer her a
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Hi Aspara Gus,

Thank you very much for your correction.

TS

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