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Tenacious Learner Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please need paragraph correction. Unit 9 (3)?

Hi teachers,
Could you correct this paragraph please?
Finally Tom and Susan are going to give a housewarming party this evening. A lot of friends and teachers are going to come. The party is going to start at 8:30 so the first guests are going to come any minute. “When are you going to take off that apron?” Tom wants to know. “In a minute, as soon as I finish cooking,” is Susan’s answer.

Thanks in advance.
  

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Finally Tom and Susan are going to give a housewarming party this evening. A lot of friends and teachers are going to come. The party is going to start at 8:30, so the first guests are going to arrive any minute.

  • Finally Tom and Susan are going to give a housewarming party this evening.
  • A lot of friends and teachers are going to come.
  • The party is going to start at 8:30, so the first guests are going to arrive any minute.
  • ” Tom wants to know.
  • “In a minute, as soon as I finish cooking,” is Susan’s answer.
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Finally Tom and Susan are going to give a housewarming party this evening. A lot of friends and teachers are going to come. The party is going to start at 8:30, so the first guests are going to arrive any minute. “When are you going to take off that apron?” Tom wants to know. “In a minute, as soon as I finish cooking,” is Susan’s answer.
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Hi Mister Micawber,
Thank you very much for your correction.

TS

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