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Tenacious Learner Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please need paragraph correction. Unit 9 (2)?

Hi Teachers,
Would you correct if there are any mistakes in this paragraph?
Julia and her boyfriend saw a film in the centre of London this evening. The fastest way home is the train but they are obviously going to miss it. The train is going to leave any second and they are just at the ticket office buying the tickets. “I’m going to find a boyfriend with a car!” Julia is thinking to herself.

Thanks in advance.
  

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Julia and her boyfriend saw a film in the centre of London this evening. The fastest way home is the train , but they are obviously going to miss it. The train is going to leave any second , and they are just at the ticket window .

— Mister Micawber

  • Julia and her boyfriend saw a film in the centre of London this evening.
  • The fastest way home is the train , but they are obviously going to miss it.
  • The train is going to leave any second , and they are just at the ticket window .
  • ” Julia is thinking to herself.
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Julia and her boyfriend saw a film in the centre of London this evening. The fastest way home is the train, but they are obviously going to miss it. The train is going to leave any second, and they are just at the ticket window. “I’m going to find a boyfriend with a car!” Julia is thinking to herself.
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Hi Mister Micawber,
Thank you so much for your proofread.

TS
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