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Tenacious Learner Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Please, need paragraph correction

Hi teachers,
Dr. Wilson was in the scene of the accident. He examined the man in the car accident, and now the man is in the hospital. Who was the man in the car accident? Henry was the man. Henry is still in the hospital, he has been there for a few days and he is going to be there for another week.

Besides, aren't there too many times the phrase 'the man'?

Thanks in advance.
  

Top answer

Thinking Spain Dr. Wilson was in the scene of the accident. He examined the man in the car accident, and now the man is in the hospital.

— CalifJim

  • Thinking Spain Dr.
  • Wilson was in the scene of the accident.
  • He examined the man in the car accident, and now the man is in the hospital.
  • Who was the man in the car accident?
  • Henry was the man.
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Thinking SpainDr. Wilson was in the scene of the accident. He examined the man in the car accident, and now the man is in the hospital. Who was the man in the car accident? Henry was the man. Henry is still in the hospital, he has been there for a few days and he is going to be there for another week.
Dr. Wilson was at
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CalifJimthe man shown in blue is needed because just he would be ambiguous between 'Dr. Wilson' and 'the man'.
Hi Jim,
That's what I thought too. Thanks a lot for your help! I'm doing American English.
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Thinking SpainThanks ...
You're welcome. Emotion: smile
Thinking SpainI'm doing Amer
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Hi Jim,
For this manuscript, the story happens between Bridgeport and Wilton.
For the other one it happens in London and around. Good memory!
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Thank you for your email, I have seen agreement, please need some correction on it.

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