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Hi Teachers,Could you correct this paragraph that I rewrote please?It’s 11 o’clock. Susan is talking to Tom. He is phoning from Paris. “Are you having a good time? What’s the weather like? Is it raining?” she wants to know.Frank and his wife are getting ready for bed. He can hear Susan downstairs. “Who’s she talking to? Is she still talking to Tom?” he wants to know.“Yes Frank, she is still talking to Tom. Come on be a good boy and sleep.” is his wife’s answer.Thanks in advance

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Could you correct this paragraph that I rewrote please?
It’s 11 o’clock. Susan is talking to Tom. He is phoning from Paris. She asks several questions. “Are you having a good time? What’s the weather like? Is it raining?”
Frank and his wife are getting ready for bed. He can hear Susan downstairs. He has questions, too. “Who’s she talking to? Is she still talking to Tom?”
His wife answers. "Yes, Frank, she is still talking to Tom. Come on, be a good boy and go to sleep.”

Clive

Tenacious Learner · Answer

Hi Clive,

Thank you so much for your reply and corrections. I really appreciate them.

Best,

TS

Canadian45 · Answer

Thinking SpainI suggest the following.
'Susan is talking to Tom, who is phoning from Paris.'
c45

Tenacious Learner · Answer

Hi canadian,

Thank you so much for your suggestion.

Merry Christmas

Thinking

Canadian45 · Answer

Thinking SpainHi canadian, Thank you so much for your suggestion. Merry Christmas Thinking

Thanks, and a Merry Christmas to you too!

(Although I realize it's almost over there now.)

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