please need help, is this correct?

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The aim of this workshop was to create a space that transmit considerations about time acceleration in the contemporary society.
The question to ask was:
1- Suffer or control time?
2- Short time versus long time?
3- Adapt or resist?
The project was explained by a video that helps people to think about the idea of the main topic.
The idea is use the bus as a place to surprise the people, to introduce them in a new time that is different from city time.
In fact service transport is a place where the research of acceleration time is more frequent than others places.
So we created an experiential space where you lose the perception of time and space while you can admire the sky.

GPY · Accepted Answer

This is the same question as at http://www.EnglishForward.com/English/Correct/bzhzqn/post.htm

Please do not post the same question twice.

Does "time acceleration" refer to a psychological effect? Overall, it is quite hard for someone not familiar with the subject you are describing to understand what you are talking about.

Narco · Answer

Yes, it is

Narco · Answer

is it grammatically correct?

The aim of this workshop was to create a space that transmit considerations about time acceleration in the contemporary society.
The question to ask was:
1- Suffer or control time?
2- Short time versus long time?
3- Adapt or resist?
The project was explained by a video that helps people to think about the idea of the main topic.
The idea is to use the bus as a area to surprise the people, to introduce them in a new time that is different from city time.
In fact in transport the research of acceleration time is more frequent than others places.
So we created an experiential space where you lose the perception of time and space while you can admire the sky.
Our main source of inspiration was the “ Sistema disequilibrante” by Ugo la Pietra.
The idea is to put sloped seat into a bus , in this way, eyesight is pointed to the transparent roof.
For increase the effect, the side windows are obscured and the noise is attenuated.

GPY · Answer

narco, I'm very sorry, it's too long for me. I'm sorry, I probably should not have replied in the first instance, as I do not normally comment on longer texts. I hope someone else here will be able to help you.

Narco · Answer

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AlpheccaStars · Answer

narcoThe aim of this workshop was to create a space that transmit considerations about time acceleration in the contemporary society.

Space is rather inert. It cannot transmit anything. Particles can move through space, but they are transmitted by other particles' interactions.

Time can accelerate as velocity increases, according to Einstein's theory. But what does that have to do with contemporary society?

narcoThe question to ask was:

The question to ask was:
1- Suffer or control time?
2- Short time versus long time?
3- Adapt or resist?

There are three items here. None of them asks an actual question. What is the question you are asking?

narcoThe project was explained by a video that helps people to think about the idea of the main topic.

OK, I can understand this sentence.

narcoThe idea is use the bus as a place to surprise the people, to introduce them in a new time that is different from city time. In fact service transport is a place where the research of acceleration time is more frequent than others places.

These sentences are difficult to understand. A bus is a vehicle; it is not a place. I suppose if a bus comes at me with a high speed, I would be surprised.

narcoSo we created an experiential space where you lose the perception of time and space while you can admire the sky.

I don't see any connection to your earlier sentences.

Narco · Answer

Are you trying to help me or to create trouble?

AlpheccaStars · Answer

I am only trying my best to understand what you have written.
It is very difficult for someone who has no idea of the subject matter (apparently something very specialized) to make a reasonable response. I hope you can use the comments to make your text more understandable to the lay person.

Narco · Answer

my only concern was the grammatical correctness. I don't want to know that a bus is not a place but a vehicle.
Thank you for your support.

Peace

AlpheccaStars · Answer

OK, I can try to ignore the semantics, and mark places with syntax problems.

The aim of this workshop was to create a space that transmit considerations about time acceleration in ~~the~~ contemporary society.
The question to ask was: (Again, there is more than one question mark in your list, but these are not questions. Do you mean all three items together make one question?)
1- Suffer or control time?
2- Short time versus long time?
3- Adapt or resist?
The project was explained by a video that helps people to think about the idea of the main topic.
The idea is : (either an infinitive or a colon followed by an imperative) use the bus as a place to surprise ~~the~~ people, to introduce them in (to? Are you going to introduce them (to each other) in a particular time frame, or make them acquainted with some different kind of time?) a new time that is different from city time.
In fact, service transport is a place where ~~the~~ research of acceleration time is more frequent than others places.
So we created an experiential space where you lose the perception of time and space while you can admire the sky.

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