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Tenacious Learner Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Please need correction. Unit 8 (4)

Hi Teachers,

Would you correct if there are any mistakes in this paragraph?

You should remember that Tim Scott lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another one. Now he works in the construction sector. He has never done that kind of work before. He has to work hard, harder that an excavation driver for example. However, he earns less money than an excavation driver. In fact, Tim has the worst job. He works the hardest, but earns the least.

Thanks in advance
  

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You should remember that Tim Scott lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another one. Now he works in the construction business . He has never done that kind of work before.

— Mister Micawber

  • You should remember that Tim Scott lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another one.
  • Now he works in the construction business .
  • He has never done that kind of work before.
  • He has to work hard — harder than the power shovel/excavator/backhoe operators, for example.
  • However, he earns less money than they do .
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You should remember that Tim Scott lost his job after he ran into a police car, so he had to look for another one. Now he works in the construction business. He has never done that kind of work before. He has to work hard— harder than the power shovel/excavator/backhoe operators, for example. However, he earns less money than they do. In fact, Tim
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Hi Mister Micawber,

Thank you so much for you reply and correction.

Too many mistakes.

Best,

TS
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Not necessarily mistakes; just infelicities.
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Hi Mister Micawber,
Mister MicawberNot necessarily mistakes; just infelicities.
Should I feel better just because they're only infelicities? Anyway, learning is the point!

Best,

TS
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