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Tenacious Learner Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Please need Correction. Formal letter
Hi Teachers,
Could you correct this letter please? It is to ask permision to use an excerpt of the book to the publisher.
Dear Madam / Sir
The book is: Kernel Lessons Intermediate
First Published 1971
Authors: Robert O'Neill, Roy Kingsbury, and Tony Yeadon
ISBN: 0 582 52240 4
The excerpt I wish to use are all the episodes of, 'The Man Who Escaped'. I also would like to use the short stories from each unit, and if possible adapt some of them to current times.
The purpose is to use them in my face to face English classes and in the near future for classes on line.
Many thanks
XXXX
Thanks in advance
Could you correct this letter please? It is to ask permision to use an excerpt of the book to the publisher.
Dear Madam / Sir
The book is: Kernel Lessons Intermediate
First Published 1971
Authors: Robert O'Neill, Roy Kingsbury, and Tony Yeadon
ISBN: 0 582 52240 4
The excerpt I wish to use are all the episodes of, 'The Man Who Escaped'. I also would like to use the short stories from each unit, and if possible adapt some of them to current times.
The purpose is to use them in my face to face English classes and in the near future for classes on line.
Many thanks
XXXX
Thanks in advance
Top answer
Hi, Could you correct this letter please? It is to ask permision to use an excerpt of the book to the publisher. You want to do more than just 'use an excerpt'.
- Hi, Could you correct this letter please?
- It is to ask permision to use an excerpt of the book to the publisher.
- You want to do more than just 'use an excerpt'.
- You want to adapt some of the book.
- In my opinion, you neeed to be clearer and more direct.
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Hi,
Could you correct this letter please? It is to ask permision to use an excerpt of the book to the publisher. You want to do more than just 'use an excerpt'. You want to adapt some of the book.
In my opinion, you neeed to be clearer and more direct. eg -
Dear
Could you correct this letter please? It is to ask permision to use an excerpt of the book to the publisher. You want to do more than just 'use an excerpt'. You want to adapt some of the book.
In my opinion, you neeed to be clearer and more direct. eg -
Dear
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