Please need correction. Arthur's work and wife

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Hi Teachers,Could you correct this paragrahp please?Before Arthur started his own factory he worked for Tracy’s factory. He started to work there in 1978. He worked 48 hours a week or more. He never earned more than £75 a week. He had another wife then. Her name was Joan and she sold sweaters in a department store. She worked 44 hours a week and earned £55.Thanks in advance

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Before Arthur started his own factory he worked for Tracy’s factory. He started to work there in 1978. He worked 48 hours a week or more. He never earned more than £75 a week. He had another wife then. Her name was Joan and she sold sweaters in a department store. She worked 44 hours a week and earned £55.

Before Arthur started his own factory, he worked in Tracy’s. He started there in 1978. He worked 48 hours a week or more, but never earned more than £75 a week. He had another wife then. Her name was Joan and she sold sweaters in a department store. She worked 44 hours a week and earned £55.

Generally speaking, try to avoid repetition.

Clive

Tenacious Learner · Answer

Hi Clive,

Thank you for helping me.

I'll try very hard to avoid repetitions.

I did two in this one and omited one comma.

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Please need correction. Arthur's work and wife

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