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Nomads Posted 17 years ago
Subject: Offer to purchase 56…………street
In the 21st May 2004 we been approached by you acting for the prospective commercial purchaser ( the mall managements or mall’s owners) expressing their interests in buying our property in the intention at acquiring part of the neighbourhood in order to prepare for a likely expansion of the mall.
After a number of attempts, there has been no movement on the part of the proposed purchasers, and the negotiation was than not pursued further.
Furthermore, as we had no particular reason or interest to sale at that point.
Considering our circumstances since receiving your approach, now living overseas and the mentioned property above been since rented for long lease.
We are not in any emergency to sale but interested to explore our options
We invite your clients first to consider the matter of acquiring the property.
Please feel free to write to us via our e-mail
Yours Faithfully.
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Subject: Offer to purchase 56…………street
In the 21st May 2004 we been approached by you acting for the prospective commercial purchaser ( the mall managements or mall’s owners) expressing their interests in buying our property in the intention at acquiring part of the neighbourhood in order to prepare for a likely expansion of the mall.
After a number of attempts, there has been no movement on the part of the proposed purchasers, and the negotiation was than not pursued further.
Furthermore, as we had no particular reason or interest to sale at that point.
Considering our circumstances since receiving your approach, now living overseas and the mentioned property above been since rented for long lease.
We are not in any emergency to sale but interested to explore our options
We invite your clients first to consider the matter of acquiring the property.
Please feel free to write to us via our e-mail
Yours Faithfully.
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Hi, Here are some suggested edits. Best wishes, Clive Subject: Offer to purchase 56…………street On the 21 st May 2004, we were approached by you, acting for the prospective commercial purchaser ( the mall management or mall’s owners) and expressing their interest in buying our property with the intention of acquiring part of the neighbourhood in order to prepare for a likely expansion of the mall. After a number of attempts, there has been no movement on the part of the proposed purchasers, and the negotiation has not been pursued further.
- Hi, Here are some suggested edits.
- Best wishes, Clive Subject: Offer to purchase 56…………street On the 21 st May 2004, we were approached by you, acting for the prospective commercial purchaser ( the mall management or mall’s owners) and expressing their interest in buying our property with the intention of acquiring part of the neighbourhood in order to prepare for a likely expansion of the mall.
- After a number of attempts, there has been no movement on the part of the proposed purchasers, and the negotiation has not been pursued further.
- Furthermore, we had no particular reason for or interest in a sale at that point.
- Considering our circumstances since receiving your approach, now living overseas and the mentioned property above been since rented for long lease.
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Hi,
Here are some suggested edits.
Best wishes, Clive
Subject: Offer to purchase 56…………street
On the 21st May 2004, we were approached by you, acting for the prospective commercial purchaser ( the mall management or mall’s owners) and expressing their interest in buying our property with the intention of acquiring part of the neighbourhood in order
Here are some suggested edits.
Best wishes, Clive
Subject: Offer to purchase 56…………street
On the 21st May 2004, we were approached by you, acting for the prospective commercial purchaser ( the mall management or mall’s owners) and expressing their interest in buying our property with the intention of acquiring part of the neighbourhood in order
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Hi ,Clive
Thank you for your help ,what i want to let the purchaser know that the tenant happy to rent the place for long period as a positive point for them.and regarding the (first) i meant to give them the first option or chance to look to the proposition before exploring other options
My letter is addressed to a corporate people i want the communication to be effective.
Thank you for your help ,what i want to let the purchaser know that the tenant happy to rent the place for long period as a positive point for them.and regarding the (first) i meant to give them the first option or chance to look to the proposition before exploring other options
My letter is addressed to a corporate people i want the communication to be effective.
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