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Alc24 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

PLEASE NATIVE HELP ME CORRECT THIS

Could you please help me make this thought natural?

1 I hate having to scour the pages of newspaper/flip/go through the pages of the newspaper to find the middle of the newspaper. I try to turn to the middle my fist try.


2 This newspaper is so compressed that it's hard to find the middle centerfold of the newspaper in one go, you need to look for the middle. The newspaper I most often find the middle of in one go is that one because it buldges as opposed to this one which is flat and compressed.

THank you
  

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I made some corrections on the sentences for you: 1 I hate having to flip through the pages of the newspaper to find the middle. I try to turn to the middle on my first try. 2 This newspaper is so compressed that it's hard to find the middle in one go, you have to look for the middle.

  • I made some corrections on the sentences for you: 1 I hate having to flip through the pages of the newspaper to find the middle.
  • I try to turn to the middle on my first try.
  • 2 This newspaper is so compressed that it's hard to find the middle in one go, you have to look for the middle.
  • The newspaper I most often find the middle of in one try is that one because it bulges as opposed to this one which is flat and compressed.
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I made some corrections on the sentences for you:

1 I hate having to flip through the pages of the newspaper to find the middle. I try to turn to the middle on my first try.

2 This newspaper is so compressed that it's hard to find the middle in one go, you have to look for the middle. The newspaper I most often find the middle of in one try i

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