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Bubu prasant Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Please modify this letter

Hello,

The following is a letter of request from a woman, to get the money her husband was to get before his death.

can you please rewrite this letter in official english.
[Please don't worry about th addresses and other formalities. It's just the body of the letter I am concerned about]

Dear sir,

I would like to bring to your kind notice that my husband, on account of his sudden death, never received the 6 month's salary due to him [ from march 15th to september15th]

It would be a great help if you could help me get these money, for which act of yours I shall be ever obliged.

Thank you
  

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Dear Sir: I would like to bring to your attention that my husband passed away suddenly, and he never received the six-month salary (from March 15 to September 15 th ) that was due to him. I would very much appreciate your assistance in helping me obtain this money. Thank you very much for your action on my request.

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  • Dear Sir: I would like to bring to your attention that my husband passed away suddenly, and he never received the six-month salary (from March 15 to September 15 th ) that was due to him.
  • I would very much appreciate your assistance in helping me obtain this money.
  • Thank you very much for your action on my request.
  • Sincerely yours,
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Dear Sir:

I would like to bring to your attention that my husband passed away suddenly, and he never received the six-month salary (from March 15 to September 15th) that was due to him.

I would very much appreciate your assistance in helping me obtain this money.

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